(I struggled for ages figuring out how to write these…)
And just like that, he vanished.
The army he commanded was tiny.
A flattery chain: Ponzi ego scheme
A crack appeared, the world split
One by one, the cities sank.
Basement sealed. It wonβt escape again.
Nice, the last one especially π
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Thank you, I think I like the last one best too π
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Well… If I wasn’t irrationally uneasy in basements, I am now. So, thanks for that. π
Lovingly,
Leona
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π Oops, sorry about that!
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I love those! Thank you for sharing!
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Oh good! My pleasure. π
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Awesome as expected. I particularly like the last two. So I know these are 6, 6 word stories…but I kinda enjoyed trying to figure out how it could actually be 1, 36 word story. And it actually works fairly well.
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I always do that when people write a list of short stories, one day I should try connecting them properly, force the story. Really glad you enjoyed them.
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Every six words I paused, savouring …
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Oh thank you, that’s really good to hear π
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Great poem. I also wanted to thank you for visiting my blog and liking my poem.
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Thank you, it’s not exactly a poem, more a series of disconnected lines, but I appreciate your visit. π
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Very interesting though. I liked it.
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I’m glad you did, your comments are very welcome too π
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It looks like you figured it out. A fun read π
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. π
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